Four days in, 7367 words. I'm not removing anything, but I've marked some things for later excision. Also, I've gone back and added some more language early on. I've got to admit - at this point my main character doesn't seem very compelling. I'm not exactly sure what to do about that. I've got to make sure he's got interesting flaws, but that he's also sympathetic.
Anyway, as always, it's posted. I'd love to get feedback, but let's give it to the fifteenth.
Anyway, as always, it's posted. I'd love to get feedback, but let's give it to the fifteenth.
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